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CYAMUNARA Y’UBUTAKA BURIMO INZU BIBARUYE KURI UPI:1/01/05/05/1782 UHEREREYE I MAGERAGERE

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  1. The heart of your writing while appearing reasonable originally, did not really work properly with me personally after some time. Somewhere throughout the sentences you managed to make me a believer but just for a very short while. I however have a problem with your jumps in logic and you would do well to help fill in all those breaks. If you can accomplish that, I would definitely end up being impressed.

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