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The heart of your writing while sounding agreeable in the beginning, did not work well with me after some time. Someplace within the paragraphs you actually managed to make me a believer but just for a while. I however have a problem with your jumps in logic and you would do nicely to help fill in all those gaps. When you actually can accomplish that, I would surely end up being amazed.